I have started my book.
“On Avilinguistics, or; An extensive treatise on the hidden language of avian animals, by, A. A. Rönttgetski” (My pseudonym I’ll be writing under, pronounced Rone-Chet-Ski)
I have written thus:[Note that words in [-] or {-} are not written, but are either additions or edits]
Birds, which are warm-blooded feathered vertebrates, with wings, scale legs, and beaks, of class Aves, are found across the world. They communicate in various ways, although the meaning, grammar, and orthography is unknown to humans.
This treatise serves the purpose of closing this gap [in understanding], furthering the knowledge of ours. It will go over the anatomy of the avian vocal system, the ways in which sound is produced, the way such sounds are to be properly transcribed, and the grammar/orthographic rules.
Chapter 1: The anatomy of Avian vocal systems
Birds, unlike humans, lack a larynx. Instead, they have what is called a syrinx. The syrinx is an organ situated below the trachea, unlike the human larynx, which lies above it. This organ is comprised of two tubes, equal in character, yet can be functioned [is this a word? what can I use to replace this with] independently [of] {replace from} each other.
|Diagram 1|
As seen in diagram 1, the syrinx contains two sets of syringeal (also called timpanic) membranes. These serve the function of vocal chords, which a bird lacks {Perhaps change to “which is lacking in birds”). This allows the bird to:
-create two tones at once
-rapidly change the sounded tone {change to "change between tones}
As the bird releases the air from the lunges, it is able to vibrate the tympanic membranes, This, in combination with tongue placement, [a]effects the sound produced.
|Diagram 2| This section can be changed some
This diagram shows the external-side view of the avian mouth (bill). We can deduce from this diagram {change to “image”} some impossible sounds that a bird could make {This needs to be changed, it sounds very rough. Perhaps "… from this diagram sounds that a bird is unable to make}
- due to a lack of lips, standard Bilabial and labiodental sounds can not be made
- However, dental (or pseudodental, see note 1) sounds, back to Velar sounds (and likely Uvelar) sound are possible {Change to “This gives us a possible range of producible phonemes from the Dental to the Uvelar regions. Pseudo dental sounds are also possible (see Note 1)”}
- Due to a lack of lips, birds can not form vowels in the proper manner, as humans do. They must rely on tongue placement and the amount of opening in the beak
|Diagram 3| (Front view of bird mouth, open)
Due to lack of teeth, birds are unable to produce dental sounds. However, as stated at Note 1, a pseudodental/pseudolabial sound could be produced.{I should add more in this section, as it is quite short
{This section from Diag. 2-3 must be revised and edited, as it could flow much better}
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Thus the avian species’ vocal ability is limited to:
- Glottal
- Pseudodental/Pseudolabial (Henceforth called Rostrumial)
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Of course it is still in progress. I can’t expect to write a chapter in a day with all I do.
Feel free to make suggestions with grammar/word choice. I will be asking my English teacher about it tomorrow, if I have a chance.